Your video was very informative. You gave many good resources to consider when buying a car. I think your voice was a good speed and very clear. However, I found it to be monotone. I think changing your tone as you speak helps keep attention. All in all, great job!
I agree with Erin's comment about your voice and the fact that there was good information. you need more things like pictures of the cheesy used car salesman, and maybe more "insider" type information like when they say, "I Have to talk to my manager about that." There is also a period of no audio, when you are test driving the car. I liked the way you had the camera set up in the back seat. The filming was very smooth. It was good information, but I just found the delivery a little dry. Add music, speak in a more upbeat manner, maybe a little faster, but not too much. Good luck.
Your video was very informative. You gave many good resources to consider when buying a car. I think your voice was a good speed and very clear. However, I found it to be monotone. I think changing your tone as you speak helps keep attention. All in all, great job!
ReplyDeleteI agree with Erin's comment about your voice and the fact that there was good information. you need more things like pictures of the cheesy used car salesman, and maybe more "insider" type information like when they say, "I Have to talk to my manager about that." There is also a period of no audio, when you are test driving the car. I liked the way you had the camera set up in the back seat. The filming was very smooth. It was good information, but I just found the delivery a little dry. Add music, speak in a more upbeat manner, maybe a little faster, but not too much. Good luck.
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